Creative, and twisted.

The Good: Interesting plot, creative and twisted, and even made me laugh a bit. The ironic ending was good too, very unexpected. I think you have some good ideas, and potential. Decent job with the sound (not bad for a starter).

The Bad: Drawing could use some work, and maybe a bit of variation of colors could help. Just try to put more style/detail into the visuals. Animations were ok, more graphics would make it more dynamic. Finally, a different loading screen would ease the eye stress (bright red hurts for a 56ker).

Conclusion: Not too shabby, just practice new techniques.

Excellent Stuff

Hey, this is some unique sound here. I like. It kind of reminds me of a distorted view on the future. Good job.